Dear Hiring Manager,
I am writing to apply for the position of Group/Region Manager (Commercial Loans) as advertised on your website. I believe my extensive experience in commercial loans and leadership within a banking environment make me an ideal candidate for this role.
I have been in the banking industry for over 10 years, most recently as a Regional Manager of Commercial Loans at ABC Bank. In this role, I was responsible for overseeing the commercial loan activity across multiple branches, including setting strategic and tactical direction to meet annual goals. I successfully drove business growth through effective management of pipelines, and achieved a 35% year-over-year increase in commercial loan originations.
I have a knack for building relationships, with both internal and external customers, which has led to higher customer satisfaction across all regions under my control. In addition, I have demonstrated the ability to understand business needs quickly and execute accordingly, having managed teams of up to 30 loan officers.
Given my extensive experience in commercial loans, I am confident that I could make an immediate impact at XYZ Bank and help drive your business goals to the next level. I look forward to discussing my qualifications further with you and would welcome the opportunity for a personal interview.
Sincerely,
Your Name